When you love someone
You become see-through
Your eyes become readable
You come open and vulnerable
When you love someone
You become happy and sad all at once
You become beautiful and insecure
You forget your uniqueness
When you love someone
You forget the world
You put your self at risk
You love someone more…
more than yourself…
sometimes…
When you love someone
You hurt and you cry.
very true...nice write..wonderful thoughts... when we love someone, we tend to forget ourselves.. make our mind close....and think 'life is beautiful.....
i know exactly how you feel. you just want to become there possession. they would love and cherish every moment of there life. i wish to be with somebody who loves me more then i do for them your writing shows sincerely how you feel
Indeed..I agree... When you love someone..you become someone you never thought you could become... Great concept..great poem!
well expressed emotion of person in love...basing probably in experience.. good theme..nice write... Ency Bearis
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It's a sweet little poem enchanting the beauty of love! My favorite lines: When you love someone/You become happy and sad all at once/You become beautiful and insecure/You forget your uniqueness....Thanks for spreading love...Loved reading it! (10)