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When You Love Someone

Rating: 5.0

When you love someone so deep inside,
It seems like it's so easy to hide.
You've loved him for so very long,
You would think he could do no wrong.

Every day you would hope and pray,
That he would always stay this way.
He treated you like you should be treated,
You thought your life was finally completed.

You thought your love was growing true,
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It was a Saturday night about ten o'clock, You heard the news and it wasn't a shock. You knew this was going to happen soon, As you laid there and cried in the pale lit moon.... schock at failure but good description of love and its spell boundd efect.. i love it...10 read mine 'Cry not' o.mother, papa do u know and papa you too and dear sun

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nice flow of expression! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Saadat Tahir 16 December 2009

touching and strong emotive lines as so often.... saturday evenings and nights...bare thye fangs and so much pain lies around amid the giggles and the thumping beats.. beautiful lines cheers

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Musical Notes 02 September 2009

marvelous.. wonderful peice thts how a pain should take form of words...

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Sarwar Chowdhury 06 July 2009

Fine rhyme/rhythm fine poetry! pain also painted beautifully! 10+

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Nikunj Sharma 01 July 2009

A sweet poem.......... simple words and deep meaning. keep it up

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Jaleel Perinjanam 01 July 2009

Hi Shilpa, on a Saturday night, you laid there and cried in the pale lit moon. How calm... All your love, passion, obsession……. poured in tears.... A poem like a gorgeous river... nobody could notice whether it is weeping or smiling.. lovely poem.. lovely feelings.. coooool.. and freezing... chilly pain with sugary toppings.. nice.... Jaleel

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