jack green

Rookie - 44 Points (Chattanooga, Tennessee)

Where Demons Dwell - Poem by jack green

I'm not here to impress
I am only here to express.
If this causes you distress.
I do not mean to depress.
Emotions i long possess.
With golden tongue slyness
A story i will to thee tell
Of a place where demons dwell
And cast their evil spell.
By orders straight from hell.
While numbers continue to swell.
In this place where demons dwell.
The home of no rest and unending pain
The late redemptions were all in vain
Drowned by the sound of the not falling rain.
While hurried along by the newly insane.
Into the darkness of this wide open plain.
In this place where demons dwell.


Comments about Where Demons Dwell by jack green

  • Marilyn Lott (7/3/2012 9:17:00 PM)


    Interesting style of poem, Jack. I enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

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  • Valerie Dohren (6/24/2012 12:02:00 PM)


    Interesting write - like the rhyme scheme. Good one. (Report) Reply

  • Willie Dixon (6/22/2012 8:52:00 PM)


    Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh, Jack is from East Lake, but he is one great carpenter and not a bad poem writer, Love you brother, Miss your Mom, Dad, and Marshenna, Love them all very much (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 1, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, June 1, 2012


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