Whew And Wow Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Whew And Wow

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Whew

Here comes Santa fagged out, dog-tired,
With his flowing white beard,
Wiping his sweat beads at last,
He's back form tiring Christmas task,
His bag of goodies emptied,
Missing his reindeer stead,
When back at last from it all,
Whew, what a task tough and tall!

Wow

There goes an old man poor, unlettered,
In meagre clothes all tattered
Despite December's cold,
On to his task undeterred,
‘Pon his shoulder a bulging bag-fold,
Eyeing the goodies littered,
Wow, he utters with joy!
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Christmas is nigh and I foresee such a scene shortly.
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Happenings | 47.12.2019 |
Topic: today, plenty, poverty, Christmas

Whew And Wow
Thursday, December 19, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: christmas,poverty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 December 2019

What an eye catcher title. Very clever. Yes, I can relate to this marvelous write. It is so sad to think though that there are so many people enjoying too much food and others barely have food on their table at Christmas time. An insightful poem very well crafted and executed.

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 December 2019

Very thoughtful of you dear poet, I'm glad you caught the point I wanted to convey. Thank you so much.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 20 December 2019

WOW WHEN WAS THAT CHRISTMAS HAS NOT COME YET BUT UR POEM IS GOOD U CAN BET

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 December 2019

Thanks dear poet, We tend to spend so much and more than that we waste so much, we litter so much in our festivals, this poem I thought was better to ponder over in advance.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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