Which Doctor? Comments

cute. nice word-order-switching to catch the line-ending rhyme! seems i heard a joke like this once. hmmm? your doctor doesn't look like he'd give extensions! i'll now place this and 'ugly brother' in my/our Sept. showcase for PH poets, on my PH site. bri :)

DAMN! ! ! i thought for SURE this would be about acid reflux disease! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I think this is great light verse!

how DOES he pick his nose? i guess he just removes one tusk and uses IT! and............ i burst out laughing at the end of your poem. to MyPoemList it goes! bri :) gee, rhyming, photo, cleverness, and humor! what more could i ask? ? got any ice cream?