Which Doctor? Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Which Doctor?

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I went to see the doc today;
He gave me just six months to live,
But when my bill I could not pay,
Another six months did he give.

Which Doctor?
Wednesday, February 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: doctor,doctors,health,humor,money,sickness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
written 10 Feb 2015
Recife, Brazil
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 15 September 2015

cute. nice word-order-switching to catch the line-ending rhyme! seems i heard a joke like this once. hmmm? your doctor doesn't look like he'd give extensions! i'll now place this and 'ugly brother' in my/our Sept. showcase for PH poets, on my PH site. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 25 August 2015

DAMN! ! ! i thought for SURE this would be about acid reflux disease! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Grace Jessen 28 June 2015

I think this is great light verse!

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Bri Edwards 15 March 2015

how DOES he pick his nose? i guess he just removes one tusk and uses IT! and............ i burst out laughing at the end of your poem. to MyPoemList it goes! bri :) gee, rhyming, photo, cleverness, and humor! what more could i ask? ? got any ice cream?

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