(whisper)

Rating: 3.1

All alone
(I’ve been betrayed)
Wrapped in fear
(Shouldn’t have stayed)
Blinding tears
(How I have paid)
Love is gone
(I have been played)
Shattered heart
(Lost in this raid)
Many things
(I had not weighed)
Distant life
(Will not be made)
Far untouched
(Dead as a shade)
Crumpled down
(Stay where I laid)
Given up
(I’ll make this trade)
Life is lost
(It will be stayed)
Dripping blood
(I bless this blade)

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joe Howell 13 May 2005

Excellent job. please send more. joe

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Elsa Brooks 13 January 2005

ur poems are so powerful, so beautiful. don't ever stop writing such evocative memorable pieces.

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