Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 685,091 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Whisper And Sing - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I was no more poets
Yet talked a lot
Imagined natural objects
Tried to weave in good words

Friends used to criticize
As they were not familiarized
With my fancy and attachment
It was purely my sentiment

I wanted to praise beautiful things
Flowers, gardens were not new or something
It appealed me more in real sense
I used to rush to nature when felt tense

I used to see beautiful reflection
When moon was appear with action
Her silvery light amazed
I was at peace and not chased

Here no one was to pull legs
Night allowed snakes to move around
Yet there was no danger to feel
They were all out for food and not for kill

Anybody would whisper and sing
Such was quality of nature to bring
The peace was essential that world could not offer
I was at rest with complete calm and no more to suffer

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  • Rajesh Thankappan (12/23/2014 10:19:00 AM)

    Sometimes poets with their swaying imaginations appears to be an out of the earth species. Nice reading. (Report)Reply

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  • Bhargabi Dei Mahakul (12/21/2014 2:46:00 PM)

    I used to see beautiful reflection
    When moon was appear with action Really beautiful poem with perfect presentation. This shines with vision and thought. Nicely penned.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/18/2014 3:07:00 AM)

    Rohani Daud likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/18/2014 3:00:00 AM)

    lovely imagery


    Amara ValaLess than a minute ago
    very well written.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/18/2014 2:45:00 AM)

    I was no more poets
    Yet talked a lot
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/18/2014 2:41:00 AM)

    I was no more poets
    Yet talked a lot
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 18, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 18, 2014


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