Who Can You Trust? Poem by Sandra Feldman

Who Can You Trust?

Rating: 5.0


Who can you trust?
The under car rust?
The businesses that went bust?
The banks that spread the dust?
The politicians who's Lies
Are a Party's, Must?

The Answer is clear,
Don't trust Anything!
That moves, talks,
Or comes near.

Monday, September 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: despair,lies
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 20 September 2016

It is true that it is not a good thing to take everyone at face value- -especially in an age of so many face-lifts. [oh, that was pretty good- -think I'll post it as a quotation! ! ! ! ] Yet part of me wants to trust implicitly in the goodness of man... well, being a woman I don't much trust men while at the same time enjoying their company and conversation- they like to DO things like ride, fish, hike, swim, ride, drive into the mountains, ride.... oh, I think I mentioned ride already, haven't I? ;) But keep on trusting good people, Sandra, they really do exist, they just aren't perfect. Very well-written poem- -crisp and to the point. 10++++++++

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Kelly Kurt 19 September 2016

My starting ground for everything is skepticism. It goes downhill from there : -)

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