Who Cares To Notice-1? Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Who Cares To Notice-1?

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_In a vast ocean
A wave vies to go nowhere,
Who does ever care?
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Haiku |20.09.2019|

Saturday, September 21, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: lost,identity
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A series of seven haikus on the same theme.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 29 September 2019

Didn't you the poet notice to write this Haiku though the wave was not aware of you...an interesting new idea to write a poem on this topic....Aniruddhaji, I've corrected my comment...hope it has a meaning now...thank you for pointing at it

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 September 2019

Thank you, you say, 'I've corrected my comment, ' Did I comment on your comment? I do not remember if you commented earlier on 'Who Cares To Notice-1'.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2019

Ocean is so vast and in this ocean a wave vies to be nowhere. This matter isn't noticed to any one. A nice haiku having a great meaning based on philosophy is astutely delineated. Thanks for going to share a series of seven haikus on the same theme. I shall try to attain these. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 September 2019

Thank you dear poet for your encouraging feedback.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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