Saturday, September 21, 2019

Who Cares To Notice-6? Comments

Rating: 5.0

A drop from ocean
Thrown off in giant motion
Moves no emotion!
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Anjandev Roy 22 September 2019

Lovely. Enjoyed it. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 September 2019

Thanks dear reader/ poet.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2019

Ocean is so vast and a drop of water is nothing to it. If a drop of water leaps to land on bank it will be mingled without notice. So vast is the universe and a man is nothing to it. A brilliant haiku co -related with other haikus of the series.

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 September 2019

Your feedback is appreciated so much dear KM, thanks.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 September 2019

A haiku worthy of contemplation! I appreciate the undertone! Thanks dear sir for sharing...10/10

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 September 2019

Thank you dear Reader/poet, but I don't know why are poets' pages not opening up?

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