Who Comes First Poem by Rob Knetsch

Who Comes First

Rating: 5.0


you could be the bright one
you could be the smart one
you could be the nice one
you could be the tall one

i could be the dim one
i could be the dumb one
i could be the nasty one
i could be the small one

you could be the rich one
you could be the known one
you could be the loved one
you could be the good one

i could be the poor one
i could be the unknown one
i could be the hated one
i could be the bad one

but can you be
are you the right one?
or could i be
am i the wrong one?

for now, right now
all that matters is
who is the first one
are you the first one?

"Who comes first" © 2014 Rob Knetsch

Monday, April 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: first,good,hate,me,nice,right,unknown,you
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 08 April 2019

In contemporary world it is a fact that one who knows how to perform marketing of self, along with true or false plus points, generally succeeds in life. Thanks for sharing a thought provoking poem.10 points.

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