Who Is He? Poem by Pranav Kumar
Who Is He?
who is he who gives me light in the darkness?
who is he who simplifies my work?
who is he who gives me comfort?
who is he who is better than the best?
Yes, he is GOD.
Too young yet talented.You have employed styles in your poem hence it is good! repetition, rhetorical questions...etc.Continue with the same spirit you will be great.
I like this I was gonna write something like this then thought against it now I wish I would've.
Dear Pranav, Out of your three couplets this one is better. Carry on. Practice more You have the feeling in you. someday it will flow automatically. Thanks Rajkumar -7
A good thought well expressed! Keep writing with HIS help! -Raj Nandy
It is a good thing that you have realized God in this young age itself.
yes he is better than the best..................your god........my god......our god................
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/30/2024 9:32:01 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A very innocent and appealing poem.Write more...