Who Was It Poem by Barry Middleton

Who Was It

Rating: 5.0


Who was it that passed me on the street today?
I was preoccupied and did not notice.
They were a blur and a shadow disappearing.
I turned but could not recognize a familiar walk.
And yesterday I heard a song I had forgotten.
It drifted like a leaf on the winds of time.
For just a moment I was young again, and you.
It seemed like spring as we walked hand in hand.
I see the distant steeple of a country church.
I think I know that place but can't be sure.
My eyes are dim, my hearing too has failed.
Who was it that passed me on the street today?

Who Was It
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 11 April 2017

Nostalgic hues in the painting of life's pace!

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Nosheen Irfan 10 April 2017

So beautifully depicted...growing old is part of life but it takes some effort to come to terms with it. Memories float around us n things we have forgotten might come out of subconscious mind to strike us with force. A huge 10.

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Barry Middleton 10 April 2017

You get it completely. Even I am amazed by my thoughts and dreams. I think this is because I am not only old but ill. I think I have come to terms with it pretty well. Writing has been a huge support for me. As always Nosheen, thank you for the comment.

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Jaya Das 09 April 2017

Now, this is a very beautiful poetry....how aging fades the memories of a person...simple yet profound!

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Barry Middleton 09 April 2017

Thanks. Fades the memories and everything else.

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