Who Would Of Known.....About Your Concept! (July 10th) Poem by Stevens Cadet
Who Would Of Known.....About Your Concept! (July 10th)
Miss concept of thoughts
Your mind is running miles
Conceiving ones through your smile
Your eyes learned to file the characteristics of a man
Make-up couldn't mend what therapy can't comprehend
You speak but somehow they never understand
That this cycle seems to never wanna end longing for some loving friends
But their known to represent B's like a Benz
When their drive stalls at 20 but limits 110
20,20 vision is the reason you surround yourself by men
For breaching through all the things these females are hiding from dudes
Just do what your forced by passion too
It's bringing tears cause you never had a clue
Of the blueprint to make wishes come true
Who tied the noose?
For thinking your loose & not being able to hang off their own truth!
'Like paying attention to the ugly duck but no one knows the Father of the Goose'
You weren't looking for the root so they say the branch of problems become you
Who would of knew that what I knew brewed from chasing truth.
Complexity in such denial situation made the flows of words become so beautiful and I must say this is a lovely poem....
I like this poem very much - the simple idea flowing and link to the other and make a beautiful great-concept thanks for sharing :)
Perhaps the title could read- Who Would Have Known... About Your Concept-. It is commendable that you wish to write a Book of Poetry. There are grammar courses which will enhance the brilliance of structure in writing poetry. Spelling is of the essence. Note: ‘there’ means ‘in that place’; ‘their’ means ‘belonging to them’; the contraction of ‘they are’ is ‘they’re’. Adeline
Expressed everything in and out...it was an interesting write_Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Bravo! A reservoir of powerful words and rich imagery! Well penned and poignant dear Stevens! I am also in the process of putting out my first book! But do not rush since you are talented and young and you plenty of time to polish your writing skills and expand yourself throughout the World! i wish you luck but take your time! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! If time permits, please read and I hope you enjoy reading my poem titled: Ÿoung Butterflies God Bless You! Romeo-New York City