Why Can'T You Stand And Observe This Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Why Can'T You Stand And Observe This

Rating: 5.0


Quiet!
Why can't you stand and observe this,
Like everyone else?

'I've seen this all before.'

Well perhaps others haven't.
No one wants to hear you tell what's coming.
I haven't seen this myself.

'But dad, you are here every year! '

And what is that suppose to mean?
Some things I've seen and some things I haven't.
I am only here for your benefit!
Didn't you say you wanted to come?

'Yeah, I did.
But I thought we were looking at the same thing.
Together.'

You're always looking ahead for something new.
Why can't you wait until it gets here?

'But it's right there...
I see it coming!
I want to see what's coming.
Something new!
I'm tired of seeing the same thing over and over,
Again and again! '

You will stand here until I'm ready to leave!

'Who's damn parade is this anyway?
Yours or mine! ? '

WHAT did you say to me?

'Quiet!
Why can't you stand and observe this,
Like everyone else?
You're gonna miss something...
If you keep staring at me, daddy! '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 04 November 2008

Quite a pity that we forget to give a little attention to what our child wants to convey to us, . perhaps loving our child is listening to what he says! Well penned, a 10.

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