Why I Need To Cry And Have God In The Sky Poem by Abdallah Gamal
Why I Need To Cry And Have God In The Sky
Once I was sitting under the tree.The sun sit in a muddy spring.
The flowers were crying beside me. And a bird wounded his wing.
I raised my sight, awh what I see... A storm and great thundering.
I worried, what will happen to me. I was lost in a mysterious ring.
All my grief got into my mind. I felt the importance of life.
And I felt that I became blind.I've cut pain through a knife.
I thought to walk against the wind, and put an end for that strife.
I remembered God, and guess what I found, I've found my life.
I said why am I sad? Why I care about that grief, while others are happy.
all what I need is belief, that there is God in the sky who makes them happy.
Very impressive. Nice. Good. Only nice words come to my mind after reading such a huge wisdom, so melodiously expressed. The rhyme in the title is very original. Very well done. When we remember God, ... What you say is sooo true.
Shows a lot of self searching and inner reflection. The last two lines wraps up the whole thing and gives the answer to your stated question. Very good!
wow! this is so great buddy! ! i like your rhyming especially the three breaking in the last stanza, congrats and keep it up dear poet! !
This poem can help so many remember God is always there for them. And for that, humanity can never thank you enough. :)
I totally agree I too have God so there's no need to cry for long He has away of wiping the tears from are eyes.Thank you Father God! ! ! Thank you for reminding us all that there is a God who cares....
hey, thanks so much for inviting me to read your poems. Great Poem, Ditto to everybody's comment. I really liked the line 'I remember God, And guess what I found, I've found my life.' Simply put, A solution to all problems, and yet so hard for many to figure it out.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 1:52:26 AM # 1.0.0
its good poem and god is here for us, that is true. I love and i ask myself same question.