Abdallah Gamal

Rookie - 345 Points (8/June/1995 / Egypt)

Voice Of Freedom,25 January Revolution - Poem by Abdallah Gamal

It was a dark night, full of fights, as if the sun will never rise
The bullets were passing beside me, but I couldn't realize
All the people were afraid, , I was trying to resist anywise
The voice of freedom rose high in the souls of the arise
The life of the oppressors, was walking anticlockwise
The voice of injustice blinked away, like its form analyse

The devil thought and thought, 'How could I make a plan,
to stop that voice, to regain everything without complain'
The birds began to sing, voice of freedom returned again
to prevail the happiness again, , to resist suffering pain.
The sun which we thought that it will never rise again.
it rose to remove steps of a man made it without vain.

The sun will keep rising and rising every day, , to bloom the flowers,
to remember us, how is that light, was thanks to God and martyrs.

Topic(s) of this poem: Politics


Comments about Voice Of Freedom,25 January Revolution by Abdallah Gamal

  • Moha Abbou (9/7/2012 4:17:00 PM)

    Hello brothers and sesters I have some thing important to say for everyone who reads Abdallah Gamal's poemsrhytoric is present, heartfelt are present, rhymes are present between the ribs of his special poem, inspiration is the experience and his brain and the magic come vie his pen.
    Moreover I can smell the glory, the honesty, the freedom and the pride.
    That's all what I have, good luck brother.
    Another aspect I have to say good bye for everyone who reads and write day and night to feed the brain with knowledge and light.
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (8/7/2011 5:59:00 PM)

    am out of words! ! ! ! ! ! awesome! ! (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (7/28/2011 7:14:00 PM)

    nice angle of vision towards this one! ! war and hope with survival...great work! (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (7/27/2011 4:09:00 PM)

    It is a beautiful poem, you express everything perfectly! ! Finally the voice of Freedom is rising up and nobody can shut it down, not any longer. The poem is a Masterpiece! (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (7/26/2011 10:20:00 AM)

    Great poem, full of heart. Very well written. (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (7/25/2011 10:37:00 PM)

    wow this poem was touchin and great (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (7/25/2011 3:57:00 PM)

    Abdallah, my great friend and fellow warrior. I join you anytime when you fight for freedom. It is an honor to read your poetry telling about the rise of a spirit on the battle field. To be elevated when you have no doubt that you fight to put down evil.
    Thank you for your fight against evil. No matter what your part in the fight may be, you deserve a heart felt s a l u t e! ! ! ....... and prayers for your success in continuing to help put down oppression......... Hugs to you and all who take part in freedoms fight...............Jim Troy
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (7/25/2011 2:42:00 PM)

    this was touching, the more i read the more impressed i am (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (7/24/2011 9:53:00 AM)

    Amazing! It has such an uplifting emotion flowing throughout it. And it couldn't be a better situation to have the emotion portrayed in. You are a really great poet (: the words you write flawlessly join together to create something beautiful that everyone can relate to and feel. Amazing: D (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Romeo Della Valle (7/24/2011 9:40:00 AM)

    There are voices that some people don't want to hear! There are voice that temporarily can be suppressed but time can only tell and the day it does, it shall be a big surprise! These voices will be carried around by the wind and heard throughout the whole World and it will be heard loud and clear! These voices are the ECHO of the people who are breaking the chains of captivity and have no longer fears. Excellent write! You delivered the message loud and clear! Thanks for sharing! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ... (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (7/24/2011 2:26:00 AM)

    You are 16 but write about more than yourself. That is a great thing about you and your poetry as most of the youths today are caught up in themselves, but you are not and that is great. keep writing good sir! (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (7/24/2011 1:40:00 AM)

    the expression is good. shanmugam (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (7/23/2011 11:52:00 PM)

    I am speechless for words, that is how good your poem was.10+++ (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Aqeb Benazir (7/23/2011 9:53:00 PM)

    very subterranean level of thoughts you conveyed through this poem. really nice. the second stanza was great! ! this is really inspirational, and inspirational poetry is one of the best genre there is. keep it up! (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (7/23/2011 9:23:00 PM)

    I can't say much except that it was a thought provoking poem. But at the same time I would suggest you take care of your diction.
    I also wrote a poem on the same topic, entitled 'Bravo Egypt! ' on page 1. You can read and rate it if you wish.
    Take care
    Akmal
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
Read all 15 comments »




Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags


Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 23, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 11, 2014


[Report Error]