Why Not? ? ? Poem by tanvi damle

Why Not? ? ?

Rating: 3.7


Why not take a crazy chance?
Why not do a crazy dance?
Who knows? today maybe your day,
tomorrow may not come your way.
Why not keep all your worries aside?
Why not go on a roller coaster ride?
Why not for a change smile?
and forget all your sorrows for awhile.
Why not for awhile act like a freak?
and to your tensions give a hard kick.
Why not live every moment?
and throw away all your disappointment.
Why not tell your loved ones how much you love them,
and make them realize that they're your most precious gems.
Why not go and sip the wine of joy?
and freak out and enjoy.
Why not give your loved one's a loving kiss,
and fulfill their every desire and wish.
Who knows? today maybe your day,
tomorrow may not come your way! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sumita Datta 18 January 2010

yes, why not.... you have described the fact in this piece of work Tanvi... :)

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Alexandra Puddle 06 December 2008

hae tanvi.. that poem is awesome. i absolutly love it! ! keep on writing :)

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Marria Attar 23 November 2008

Wow..very catching poem..Well Done!

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Lee Jackson 22 November 2008

fascinating use switching from rhyming form and then back at the end. I like it. Very catching poem. Felt like I was on the edge waiting for the crescendo and then it switched gears into something completely surprising

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Tom Golding 22 November 2008

Nicely expressed images and refreshing to write of making others happy.

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