Will They Win? Poem by Sandra Feldman

Will They Win?

Rating: 5.0


On the crest
Of a wave
The Surfer sped,
Hoping
To get ahead
Of Life's
Bitter game.

At the end
Of a Pen,
The Poet
Wrote,
Words of love
That were
Ignored.

As Stupid Men,
Kept up
The bad fight
Lying, abusing
Killing all Kindness
With all their might,
Spreading Evil
And Fright!

Taking away dignity,
Life and pride,
Love of Country,
Planting, divide.

Think about it!
And you?
Will you let them
Win.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soran M. H 13 November 2021

The bad fight Lying, abusing Killing all Kindness With all their might, Spreading Evil And Fright!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 November 2021

Beautifully crafted and well executed write. Powerfully presented. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 November 2021

A powerful poem. Incisive and well expressed. Let us not allow evil runs our life. We must fight for our basic and fundamental rights. We must fight those evils.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 November 2021

Sometimes life is unfair. The truth will not always win. Yet, there will be a time when people will rise in unity and defeat the evil that makes life unbearable. Those who make a mockery on justice, equality and freedom will later on pay for their misdeeds and crime.

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Soran M. H 13 November 2021

The poet poses an essential question in the conclusion and makes the reader a part of the game, but the struggles of life continue and the truth does not always triumph

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Soran M. H 13 November 2021

Think about it! And you? Will you let them Win.

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