I saw a couple walking by
fighting with each other
The noise made some sparrow cry
my heart was painfully bothered
I went to my life, my treasure
my soul boiled like a monster
I looked at her and thought for a measure
then with love, I asked her
Will you stay with me?
you girl, my only one
Can we always be?
please don't go away or run
Will you have me near?
to hold you in my arms
I will try to let you never fear
protect you from all harm
Will you, with me, have a talk?
tell whats on our minds
Together while we have a walk
in you, happiness I find
Will you go through the times?
with me, both happy and sad
Go through all hardships and terrors
that might make us go mad
Will you forgive all?
the sins that I commited
Even when I fail and fall
those things, you all omitted
Will you keep my Heart?
safe and unharmed
Please don't break it apart
my heart that you charmed
She came up to me, held my hand
and started crying.....until
She whispered 6 loving words
'I love you and always will'
WOW! ! ! ! i loved see if any guy could come up with somethin like this well wow i mean its GREAT and i have no problem giving it a 10 and btw i just love the way u spoke ur feeling through out the whole thing! !
I can see a caring mind in you. Keep writing. All the best
ken suh. this is a marvelous piece of work you got here. the person that is to receive this is a lucky one. i hope the both of you much happiness.
awww so nice love it this is perfect to give to ruth she would love it i know i would she would be crazy not to love this poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice work i voted it a 10