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World Of Darkness

Rating: 4.5

Waking up to a dark dreary world
the drug is in affect
My head has gone off
where is this place?


Darkness all darkness
none can see through
No bliss, no happiness
love? where are you?

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Arik Carpenter 03 February 2009

wow, ya know what? it kinda reminds me of romeo and juliet

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Natalie Beers 05 February 2009

It's really good. Like everyone says it reminds me a little of Romeo and Juliet. Very strong!

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Leslie Ching 04 February 2009

sad and heartfelt...a bit long, but interesting...

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Sonya Florentino 04 February 2009

Arik is right, sorta like Romeo & Juliet. Alas! the poison is fast, .. and no turning back! : {

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very intriguing story you tell here my friend. wanted to read more and more a i read on. great!

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A sad but substantive story that touches the heart with a coragous cry. Keep writing my friend.

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