Wind When Betides Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Wind When Betides

Rating: 5.0


goodbye when poignant in the valley of the tunes
morning never be the wishing by the tea cup
breeze when passes by the desire for trudging the top hill
hope yet slakes by the swing to touch moon or the sea

passion when exalts the freedom by the glow
purpose never be defeated by the brave man
gallant soldier still remembers his night by the home
the fight yet rigid in the frame of iron across the bayonet

it is not the cupboard love that you left the home
near and dear ones when remember with the grimaces
blood still intones by the vain never being saddled
shadow yet cuts the glow by the heedless haze

greens when surmise the sorrow by the mainstay
I will not be the same man as I am by the flame
yet the gray hair falling to the ground by the age
hedge still betiding of the the hours by the tears

askance glares the lamp post by bequesting the glow
the curve of smile when meanders away by the mirror
I will just remember the days embracing the pages
History still loves the brave soldiers who fight the games

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sameer Ahmed 05 July 2009

A very touching poem. The soothing pattern of wind is indeed the one of the most wonderful peculiarity of The Mother Nature and it shapes us so refinely that we comeup with several thoughts and idealogies that otherwise stay astray in our minds and fail to reveal. The ending is just splendid and shows the wisdom, respect and honour you have in context of those who fight for the dignity of their land......10/10

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Thad Wilk 04 May 2008

This poem is really touching and very well executed Dr. Kar! History will still love the brave soldiers, that fight the game! So true! ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Ian Bowen 04 May 2008

Nice poem, well penned. Ian

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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