Where Are You Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Where Are You

Rating: 4.5


night is there by its dark skin
dawn may come with spankings of colors
shadow would find its shambling
green would resonate being kissed of gloss

clouds of rain wears misty cloak
blue of sky sees in mirror of grey mountain
cup rain may dissipate to awake dregs of silhouette
sands of time feels warmth of honor

sultry breathe of wind seeks to flow
birds returns home fluttering to adore
by lone vesper of moments feels to sway
heart seems to swaddle to paint in red, .

earth pulls all by law of gravity
longing to adore scaffold of strength
mortality is the path of joy and sorrow
soul needs salvation as when heaved off

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 14 August 2014

mortality path of joy and sorrow, I like it sir, thanks,

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Roseann Shawiak 04 September 2014

Great flowing rhythm using imagery to guide it through your poem. This poem seems to flourish within, using nature itself to reach out and touch the mind. A beautiful and enticing poem. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Chinedu Dike 03 September 2014

My favourite line is Mortality is the path of joy and sorrow l like the flow and the structure.

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Heather Wilkins 19 August 2014

a beautifully written poem about nature good imagery

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Amitava Sur 17 August 2014

A detailed depiction of diff. states of nature and human on earth..... loved it

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Rain ... 15 August 2014

A beautifully organized poem...... I love reading each line... -Rain...

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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