Wings Like That Poem by Steven SRS

Steven SRS

Oakland California

Wings Like That

 


Wings like that me lift off the ground
Love your that my spins head around
Up when I’m I want never to come down.

Please oh let never love annoy
There’s because I nothing more enjoy.
Been these life’s wonderful days few past
And want I All for is it to last and last…

To like I’d say me making never stop happy
But words there aren’t with rhyme that happy
Anyway, Happy been I’ve these few last days
And that that’s hope I always it stays.

Wings like that me lift off the ground
Love your that my spins head around
Up been I’ve, I want never to come down.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kasey Graham 26 June 2010

I take back my previous comments, ... THIS one is my very favorite! ! ! I loved, loved, loved it! ! ! Amazing play on words, .. the muddled order gives great passion to the sentiments expressed. Felt like 15 and in love again for the first time!

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Bele Lele 12 August 2009

The first stanza is my favourite, good poem 10+

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