Wings Of Night (Haiku) Poem by Kevin Patrick

Wings Of Night (Haiku)

Rating: 4.9


Under wings of night
Two moons watching from a tree
Owls wake the dark

Wednesday, August 31, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nightfall
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 05 October 2016

I love lines that reach out from a poem and grab me and give me a shake! ! ! - - - -Two moons watching from a tree - - - my eyes got as round as saucers and I hooted.... Who is writing that? What can he mean? Ah-ha, it's owls waking up the dark. Absolutely beautiful images, great wake-up phrase, and altogether enjoyable. 10++++++++++++++++++++

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 September 2016

Wow this is yor first poem that is deep but which I understood without racking my brain that much and it is an awesome observational haiku. Great metaphor n imagery here. Kudos. Nice to read from u again, pls do comment my latest poem on eclipse too.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 31 August 2016

Fantastic imagery coupled with minute observation brought-out in unique style. Thanks for sharing.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 31 August 2016

Excellent meaningful poem with the beauty of the nature. Enjoyed. X

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Elena Sandu 31 August 2016

I love this haiku, excellent creation! Never seen an owl in darkness, now I know how it looks, thank you!

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