Winter People Poem by Val Morehouse

Winter People

Rating: 5.0


Faces of natives turn inward
like talk in uncertain throats.

Small replicas of life eclipse
inside shuttered eyes,
narrow horizons between stones,
and still ponds, frayed with
pitchpine and knotted oak,
tinder of witches.
Underneath pewter skies they winter
through fog where only ice is genuine;

And it spare as a puritan,
with the color of silver.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alonzo Lau 14 December 2018

I think this is bad because there are no rhyming words.😡🤔🤫🤭

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Alonzo Lau 14 December 2018

I think this is bad because there are no rhyming words.😡🤔🤫🤭

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Sonny Rainshine 24 November 2007

Superlative vocabulary and striking mood/word-picture piece. Love the phrase 'tinder of witches'-very vivid.

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Ivan Donn Carswell 18 November 2007

Val, how do you say fabulous without drooling! Rgds, Ivan

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