a lay riddles us
with a curious phrase
as waves ripples
in poetic enigma
a delightful riddle
teases pleases as
mind unravels
assimilated layers
time explores
possibilities
Terence George Craddock (Afterglows Echoes Of Starlight)
Copyright © Terence George Craddock
Ver well written poem. 'mind unravels assimilated layers time explores - Possibilities' 5*
I have often thought in literature, depth in layers like plywood, makes the diversity or contrast in the text a more interesting multidimensional read. Then a few simple lines gain unexpected strength.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A wonderful poem that expresses the wonders of Poetry. We cannot fathom the depth and enigma of Poetry. A brilliant and discerning poem as always.
p2 But in the past with little or no time, I often posted drafts with a few grammatical errors. It was write post fast or get little or nothing done. I choose then the fast draft option, viewing little and less to be getter than nothing.
p1 It is very kind of you to say 'A brilliant and discerning poem as always' Rose, but the reality is, if I have more time to write, I sometimes get lucky with a few poems.