Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 49,953 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

With A Finding Discovered - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

I doubt very seriously if my strides taken...
To want to motivate others to desire success,
Had been made more for them a priority...
Instead of something they did to see me pleased,
Or whatever that is done people do to appease...
Would I have adopted an inspiration,
To dropp them as my main activity.

With an applying all my focus done now,
As I do...
Upon doing my best.
To achieve without further wasting my time.
With a finding discovered,
Others only choose to make for themselves...
Excuses to accomplish as if to me to be defiant.

Nonsense embraced is inescapable these days.

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 22, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, December 23, 2011

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