With You Without You Poem by anju addanki

With You Without You

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Withoutyou, the world has become
an incredible reality.
Joys find me smiling
and grief, brings forth tears.

With you care did not press,
Worries did not depress,
The broken thread of understanding
between myself and the world,
did not make me frown.

Without you, I am busy
mending threads, tying knots
and understanding this new art.

With you, mountains fascinated me
and spring looked beautiful
Nothing could scare me, other than Death.

Without you, I see mountains as barriers
And spring makes me
aware of not-so-far Autumn.

And Earth is the only reality
that doesn't frighten me, now.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 25 April 2010

With you, mountains fascinated me and spring looked beautiful Nothing could scare me, other than Death. i like these lines. love is life. without that we are barren. keep wriiting. God bless you i invite u to read my poems. i shall be happy to recieve your sincere comments

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Nikunj Sharma 24 June 2009

Without you, I am busy mending threads, tying knots Nice lines.....showing compassion and friendly reliablity. please read my poems titled, SMILES, LET'S DREAM and HOLD A MIRROR. shall be grateful for your comments

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Lady Grace 19 June 2009

repetition of words in your title makes the poem strong.., it is beautiful..grace

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