My Daughter! Poem by anju addanki

My Daughter!

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Oh! she is seven -
And feels all is heaven.
Mom! that lipstick is mine-
And says all is fine.
Dad! get me play-station-
And the house blows like a fire-station.
Take me to the parlour-
To make my hair curler.
Gets my purse-
And the car is reveresed.

And, there you see:
My DAUGHTER:
With curly hair;
Red lipstick;
With a play station;
And then she says-

Folks! ! ! All is Heaven.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 27 June 2009

Very interesting and nice poem.

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rago rago 27 June 2009

mirror image............astonished...........

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Indira Renganathan 27 June 2009

Very interesting.... baby girls are born with that quality these days....my grand daughter two years old is asking for fancy bags and goods nonstop now-a days...funny poem

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Indira Babbellapati 30 June 2009

very soon she'll be a teenager...and imagine!

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Kranthi Pothineni 26 August 2009

Made to smile.Rhyming is good along with flow and theme. Well penned emotionally.

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Atyam Sruti 14 July 2009

UR DAUGHTER WOULD BE PROUD OF GREAT MOTHER LIKE U..........

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Carol Gall 30 June 2009

seven is a fun age great write

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 30 June 2009

I want to feel like children does.

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Nikunj Sharma 30 June 2009

sweet poem Anju, Am sure your daughter is as sweet too. pls read 3 of my poems that I wrote for my daughters 1. Long live the ice cream 2. Little painter 3. A geometric dog shall be grateful for your comments

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