Without A Doubt. Poem by Fay Slimm

Without A Doubt.

Rating: 5.0


There was something eternal
................................between them.


Something electric,
................................ uncontrollably
Real though astral,
......................... it was quite lustily
Physical too,
.................. releasing - consoling.


They knew this to be so,
...............................and gratefully
Counting each benefit won
............................. they remained
Best of friends,
....... respect for destiny's fateful
Attraction ensured
...... they kept what was gained.


By allowing leads
............. which came from above
This they knew without doubt,
.................. they had found love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 02 October 2009

lovely fay nice flow 10

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Tai Chi Italy 02 October 2009

You got the formula so right Fay! A beautiful match Without a doubt. Smiling at you Tai

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Lynda Robson 02 October 2009

Without a doubt, a lovely poem about the perfect match, 10 Lynda xx

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Eyan Desir 05 October 2009

Good flow of words good write

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Lady Grace 06 October 2009

this is a nice piece, , , without a doubt, revelation follows...

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Shashendra Amalshan 17 October 2009

'By allowing leads ............. which came from above This they knew without doubt, .................. they had found love.' I loved the note in which you end the poem. This is such a magical poem. A heavenly love indeed! ! ! ! Faboulous Fay! ! A++ Lovess Shan

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Alison Cassidy 16 October 2009

Delayed gratification is often the difference between lasting joy and unsatisfying indulgence. I love this one. Understated and gentle, you make your point with great spiritual truth. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Georgia Girl 07 October 2009

Divine fate always has a special feel to it...fantastic! ! ! 10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 07 October 2009

fine phrasology! thoughtful! 10+

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Sonya Florentino 06 October 2009

match made in heaven...they made earth-skaking love in earth's garden....mmmm!

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Fay Slimm

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