Without Comfort Poem by Timothy Weiermann
Without Comfort
The world has faded into an eclipse
As someone steals the breath from her lips
The nectar that was us can no longer be
As what was her has now been set free
The night has deepened to a somber dusk
As we no longer know of the bond called trust
The forbidden tears well in my eyes
As the heavens melt to starlit skies
Lonely once more,
My forever-long bane
Without the comfort of her,
How shall I stay sane?
You're poems have a beautiful rhythmn and a wistfulness to them. You are young and have everything ahead of you. Live now! Enjoy now! ! You will meet many girls in your lifetime. You write wonderful poetry and expressing yourself in writing validates how you feel at the time. Thanks for sharing.
you have writen a couple like this one and i think you are in love or have great feelings for this girl it shows it in your poems
Lonely once more, My forever-long bane Without the comfort of her, How shall I stay sane? Na dont u worry ull always be sane. great write tim. keep sharing love anju
Absolutely beautiful poem...its so descripitive and just...wonderful -tess
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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beautiful. i luv it.