Without you the waters lie still; the reflections of silent trees
Remain as though transfixed but not tranfigured.
Green shrubs and leaves remain sombre; clouds peer
And wonder at the stillness.
It might even rain. Why doesn't the rain
Fall now and be done with it's will?
Without you feelings remain in my heart
Unable to be expressed. Freedom and finery
Are long behind. Senses and sense are nonsense.
When will the cells in my body awake?
When will the dawn come and awakening light
Awaken my brain?
Let me wait for another day yet again.
Copyright: Rani Turton
This speaks so clearly to the reader's heart - - and identifying with the same experience I feel the same emptiness Rani - - - a very moving verse...10 plus from Fay..
this is a nice piece Rain, I tried something similiar 'Without You' Regards
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'Without You'...But it's 'With You Always' as the heart says there...Feelings unexpressible nicely compared with rains hesitating to pour down...beautiful poem Rani...thanks...10