M. Asim Nehal

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Without You…&…with You - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

I am incomplete........Without you
Life is uninteresting....Without you
Realities are dream........Without you
And dreams are realities.........Without you

Heart beats but misses’ life.......Without you
Eye sees but not admires beauty......Without you
Goals achieved are not milestones......Without you
Judgments gets jeopardize.................Without you

All dreams comes true...........................With You
Happiness expands and surrounds...............With You
Mountain looks like ground.................With You
Thoughts goes fine......................With You

Time stops around.....................With You
Wind composes songs...............With You
Journey looks short...........With you
Nothing goes wrong.......With you

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Without You…&…with You by M. Asim Nehal

  • (2/10/2016 2:48:00 PM)


    Unique in style..........10 (Report) Reply

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  • Sanjukta Nag (9/18/2015 1:23:00 AM)


    Well knitted comparison elevating the power of love. Beautiful work (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (9/17/2015 11:54:00 PM)


    Love makes such big difference.Nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • (9/17/2015 11:28:00 PM)


    Beautiful submission of facts before the most cherished companion.Enjoyed the poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 17, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 17, 2015


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