Woman! Poem by Elizabeth Padillo Olesen

Woman!



Are you the Eve
that tempts Adam
or the snake that
hisses around
to spit its venom
on its prey, the man?

Or are you the woman
in the Garden of Eden
born out of the womb
of your mother,
clothed in the wings
of your freedom and passion?

Are you the woman
proud of your culture and origin
who cannot be damned to hell
by the forefathers' heaven
of long-waged patriarchy?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Babatunde Aremu 19 October 2012

Pertinent questions. I like your style, simple flowing lines. Great write and good message.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 11 October 2012

Thanks for your reflective comment Veeraiyah. Well, appreciated.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 11 October 2012

heart regales in what it needs distinction yet melds into wine...beautiful write,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 09 October 2012

what is there to cheat the men, when the men are good at it! I think Adam should have eaten the FA on his own and the men writers should have twisted the story to put the blame on an innocent naked woman! the last paragraph carries a good question! ! !

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