Women I Adore Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Women I Adore
Women I adore
Every opportunity I explore
To praise them in their work
Not with pleasing attitude but with honest words
I will not say that each woman reflect mother
But I will certainly say that they are no others
But real origin from where we are today
They need to be honored by all the way
Let sisters play their role
Let wife respond different call
But in all mothers are different
If not more but I praise them at present
Men may break any time
Loose patience sometimes
But woman may always stand by
Render all assistance and try
I bow head for their tolerance
Hard work and dedication for lovely presence
She can go for any ordeal
As her emotions are real
They have different role to play
In any position they stay supreme
No one can take away their position
They have kind heart with mild composition
in every form i observe a motherhood hidden in her heart. regards.10+++
ARE YOU FAMINIST Saroj Khan15 minutes ago GOOD Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago dear friend/madame.. to adore woman is one of the greatest work if we can do Comment +1
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welcome Rohani Daud, Maricela Ramírez and Ramesh Rai like this. a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1
didnt care for it Landen Aaron15 minutes ago didnt care for it
Good, just watch fluency. Miss Padishyia13 minutes ago *It's lose, not loose. Also, there were a few awkward sentences in your poem. You might want to review those areas. Looking at your poem as a whole, however, I thought it was very nice. Most of the words at the end of each sentence seemed to flow smoothly. It was just a few that did not quite work out. Comment 1 Comment0 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago loose seems correct word madame Comment +1
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Women I adore Every opportunity I explore