Wonder Jasmine Says.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Wonder Jasmine Says....

Rating: 5.0


Wonder Jasmine Says....
What Day Is It Today….?

I do not remember anymore what day it is today
since I have got so many comments and compliments,
that my head is growing,
i feel it's getting bigger and bigger,
the world is turning upside-down
the summer birds are already here
to chirp for me a happy song,
never goes wrong
here is where I belong
and I am myself and can handle all things become strong
so many loveliest and amazing compliments,
not one single lament

the most especially from Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir, included all the precious 10's and he never reminds me that I have to give his poems comments too,

never ever,
and these all for nothing, not a thing!

Dear Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir,
I wish to say once again out loud:

You are the poet sent by God
sure, you are my greatest blessings ever,
on PoemHunter.

I wish to tell you through these less scintillating words

you are truly my Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir!

Your fellow poet on Poem Hunter
humbly me,

Wonder Jasmine

Wednesday, March 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: appreciation,blessings,god,honesty,life,poetess,respect
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wish to tell you through these less scintillating words

you are truly my Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir!

Your fellow poet on Poem Hunter
humbly me,

Wonder Jasmine...............AKA Sylvia Frances Chan
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 05 March 2020

You have reflected your greatness in each of your poem and I find deep honesty of yours in this poem too. This Allegory poem is very special and heart touching. I am again overwhelmed and I love the way you have represented this work.. Generally we do not remember the day what day it is as we remain busy in reading and writing and we feel the inner peace. less scintillating word has carried broader and brighter sense. Hence this is special poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 March 2020

Your full effort carries full courage to speak truth and your word is completely motivational one. God is greatest father and he has graced all of us. By his grace we have become poets. His greatest blessings we feel and we feel deepest emotion and his reflection. God has granted us freedom and we feel peace by his grace only. Our father is watching us continuously.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 March 2020

You are wonder and you are Jasmine. Thant is why you are wonder Jasmine. We feel your fragrance of writing and devotional attitude towards God. You are a true dedicated devotee of God. Christ has kept his hands over your head and blessed you with deeper knowledge for serving for humanity. Although we do not remember what day it is, still we remember that each day we live by his mercy. We should do good things in this day.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 March 2020

This is not a thing, this is a hem. This is not a leaf but a flower. This is a song of heart. Soul feels its reflection and light of joy. Wonder Jasmine dedicates her life in service of God with full blooming. We see the art of her hands. We feel the emotion she shares. Wonder Jasmine has bloomed in this garden and perfectly serving for all creatures by command of God and she is devotee of God.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 June 2020

Dear poetess Zaynab, I cannot write my comment/ response below your comment here, so I must write this here. Thank you so much for your kindest comment and compliment. Sure, I will read your newest poem. As this is submitted here, in the meantime, I already did give response to your newst poem. I did already.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 March 2020

What you said in rhyming was ESP wonderful and poetic going strong, making for a superb poem. Kudos! Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too, titled, " pink mania inking', I have to remind so you can enjoy mine as much as I did yours.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 March 2020

For your full effort this poem deserves full rating and I have rated full 10 point without being late from the beginning before reading. This will definitely be treasured with time. Thank you once again for sharing this lovely work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 March 2020

I am deeply touched by your kind word and valuable lines. Thank you very much dear great poetess to express your wonderful perception about me. I express my deepest feelings over your valuable work and I thank you very much for your high effort to pen this poem. Your expression in this poem is incomparable. This is definitely an outstanding poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 March 2020

Wonder Jasmine feels the path of God's direction and that is why she is good to all. Many comments and compliments she receives by his grace. God understands her faith. We all are faithful to him. We all behold his rights to nourish this Earth and keep resources in right manner for other generations. Whatever may be the day today, today is important as this day is our trust day and present time to work effectively.

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