Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 6,539 Points (Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

Words From Within - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

the words form within
resourced as red as mingled
in the midst of art as painted
yet with the blood into the core
flowing from a stream unseen

trudged with the love as flute
rising each breath to its moon blue
but alas tears flips as pouncing
like rain fledged by the sun

lest lost to the dreams as lone
as when smudged to the dust
when shattered by fears as flakes
as I embrace the day as sky to earth

looking to the hue high yet empty,
as refrained from completeness
of the universe yet unsung song

as I remember the reasons of touch
yet untouched in its depth palpable
as soft velvet core yet seems subsumed
as the smiles heaved on fossil still


Comments about Words From Within by Dr subhendu kar

  • (12/5/2007 12:01:00 AM)


    SUCH
    EMOTION PUT DOWN IN THIS POEM!
    BEAUTIFUL
    Love and Hugs,
    Linda
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  • (11/16/2007 5:36:00 AM)


    Standing firm when faced with the deepest problem life offers. growing and learning to find....help in lonely times of....and pain. walking through setbacks to emerge a stronger person on the other side. (Report) Reply

  • (11/14/2007 6:48:00 AM)


    now, i see a lot of emotion on your poems doc, seems like you are getting emotional. i love your work, very fine beautiful written thanks. (Report) Reply

  • (11/3/2007 3:46:00 PM)


    Hi Dr Kar! A really deep poem, shows a lot of emotion there.Great write! (10) !
    Thad
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 3, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, April 22, 2011


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