Wednesday, October 19, 2016

Work Comments

Rating: 4.3

Pushing off on her back out
Into the fishpond's cold
Archaic glitter, my naked wife
Could not have guessed how
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Sherod Santos
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Douglas Scotney 26 October 2016

you made that moment a lot more than hum-drum

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 October 2016

Very nice. Liked reading it.

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Savita Tyagi 26 October 2016

Marvelous poem stealing a splendid cherished moment from a busy work day. Thank you for sharing.

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Babatunde Aremu 26 October 2016

On that stalled shore she climbed Back out among cool......Good use of imagery. The poet brought the basics of work into life. Bravo!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 October 2016

Nice piece! ... Congrats for being chosen for the day....

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 October 2016

From the sedges! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sherod Santos

Sherod Santos

Greenville, South Carolina
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