Pushing off on her back out
Into the fishpond's cold
Archaic glitter, my naked wife
Could not have guessed how
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Marvelous poem stealing a splendid cherished moment from a busy work day. Thank you for sharing.
On that stalled shore she climbed Back out among cool......Good use of imagery. The poet brought the basics of work into life. Bravo!
Nice piece! ... Congrats for being chosen for the day....
you made that moment a lot more than hum-drum