Working Out Of A Corner Office Poem by Tom J. Mariani

Working Out Of A Corner Office

Rating: 5.0


I thought I started out strong
After taking many body blows
My guard began to drop

It felt like - -my head being snapped back
I keep moving while holding on
Waiting for the bell

Once seated in my corner
My cut man
Goes to work

Cotton swabs and alum
Attempting to stem the red flow
From above my right eye

He presses on my face
With a piece of ice-cold steel
Trying to keep the swelling down

My manager is moving around
In front of me waving an ice-bag
Replaying his advice from all my fights

The crowd has their opinions too
If I could turn and challenge them
To step inside the ring

That would get them
To back off
That and standing up and spitting

Water and blood in their direction
Into a bucket that sits on the apron
Near the ringside seats

Instead my mouthpiece is slid back in
Past swollen lips while I wait in my corner
For the bell that will start the next round

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[I dont' usually make comments on my poems. That's up to the readers to do. However, I've heard from so many readers that can't get past the controlling image of this poem; boxing. I wrote this poem long ago. Long before I saw the movie, 'Michael Clayton.' For some of the other facets to work for the reader of this poem, I have two suggestions: 1) it's out on DVD now so you can rent the movie 'Micheal Clayton.' Think about the character Arthur working out of a corner office, and 2) like any poem, my title is trying to give you a hint of what direction the poem is going to take. a) metaphor of 'working out' - - trying to take care of yourself and b) the stress, grind and responsibility of working in middle or upper business managemnt.

I put this after the end of my poem. I don't want to spoil it for a first time reader. I hope they got, on their own; that this poem is not just about boxing. The same way that Coleridge's 'The Rime of the Ancient Mariner is not about the cruelty to an Albatross, nor is Virgina Wool's 'The Death of the Moth' about lepidopterology.]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marilyn Lott 10 October 2008

A very interesting poem, Tom and many can relate. Keep up the writing, you are great! But you know what? I can see you writing a mystery novel. Ever tried it? I think you have the touch for it - perhaps in first person along the lines of this poem. Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Hans Ostrom 18 November 2007

This is great-it indeed works well with 'Career.' Luckily, I don't have to commute far and still like my academic job okay, but a friend who was once an academic and is now at Microsoft found 'Career' to be too close to the bone for him; he might find your poem to be the same.

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