Stewart McKenzie


X Diary 05 Time To Go - Poem by Stewart McKenzie

We walk as if on weakening ice
Above a great darkness.
Dancing is - difficult
When the ice is thin.

Hey listen!
There's a light below the ice.

“Let go!
The water's fine for drowning,
And there’s music in the deep.”

Fishes of light
Part the banded water
In turning eddies of song.


Comments about X Diary 05 Time To Go by Stewart McKenzie

  • (11/16/2005 1:23:00 PM)


    VERY NICE. lOVED THE LIGHTNESS OFTHE WORK AND THE IMAGERY. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/16/2005 1:05:00 PM)


    I'm terrified of falling through a frozen lake Stewart..........so the metaphor here really got me! Great poem. Sincerely, mary (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 16, 2005

Poem Edited: Monday, January 8, 2007


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