Y - Hole- 9 Poem by JOE POEWHIT

Y - Hole- 9

Rating: 5.0


Man look at that hole.
Big and very bold.
Makes me feel old.
AND-very cold.
Very-very deep hole.
Filled with GLOBAL WATER.
Melted with the bold.
JUST GOT VERY COLD-real COLD.
Stay away from that hole.
Very deep hole-and cold.
Don't be that bold.
Filled with GLOBAL water cold.
No fish in the hole.
Dirty water toxic mix.
Crazy baby doper needs a fix.
Send him to the deep hole.
You tell-I'm not that bold.
Stay away from that hole.

2/8/2007 Joe Poewhit

JESUS SAVES

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 October 2009

Man look at that hole. Big and very bold. Makes me feel old. AND-very cold.......great mastery in placement of words.... beautiful write i admire it....10 read mine kind gesture.... as a friend

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Fiona Davidson 25 February 2009

Excellent write Joe...thank you...10++

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