Y// Lying On My Back Comments

The relaxing poem really sound soft, the picture you took and shared for us indeed enhance the perception in thought, like a pseudo-experience there, at the place.

(cont.) by/greenery is NOT what i call a perfect rhyme. i strive for perfect rhymes' in almost all of my poems. But I LIKE that you did not bother to search for a 'perfect' rhyme. i feel that some (other poets') poems are damaged when poets try too hard to rhyme, AND they succeed; i'd much rather have no rhyming if rhyming damages a poem. bri :) time to look out the window at the clouds. ah ha! there is one now!

from Google: Did you know: Casuarina*** produces individual male and female flowers on the same (monoecious) or separate trees (dioecious) , depending on the species. [there was no? ] and NO I DID NOT KNOW! *** called rhu in current standard Malay. to MyPoemList. no 'smell' in this poem. :) (cont.)

A poet and nature are inseparable. Poets imagination hovers around nature. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.