Sunday, May 15, 2016

Y// Not Yet Closing My Eyes Comments

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Just before drifting into sleep at night,
all compassion and kindness of a day,
that has been passing again too quickly,
crosses the eye of my mind and heart.
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Aufie Zophy
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Terry Craddock 04 January 2017

Sleep Righteous Weary exquisite moments longing to retain peace soft quiet moments before sleep exhausted body overtired must drop like a stone to steal every precious second of sleep before waking to many work responsibility moments blessing with earnest good will endeavours Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Y// Sleep Not Yet' by the poet Aufie Zophy. Dedicated to the poet Aufie Zophy.

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Terry Craddock 03 January 2017

a also once wrote a poem about sleep dear to my heart, yes 'The soft pillow holds my head Sleep invites waiving wonder dreams but the magic and the peace of the moment keep me from closing my eyes' these are exquisite moments, longing to retain the peace of quiet moments before sleep, so much better than the exhausted body overtired that must drop like a stone to steal every precious second of sleep, before waking to many work responsibility moments blessing with earnest endeavours

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Nosheen Irfan 27 May 2016

Awesome expression. The time when we are in bed, free from the day's chores is such a blissful time. Waiting for sleep has its charms n pleasures.

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