It is written in the sand
The purpose of our life
Millions of grains of sand
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I love many parts of your poem but this one just bind to my mind The clouds will rain and And diamond beads will ornament the rose The rose's scent will tell it The purpose of our life Cheers :)
Very nice and it made from beautiful thought definately...As we will read what was written in the sand someday, let you read my comment written in your mind first, and my comment is..very well done Hans :)
Very philosophic.... the purpose of life may be sometimes written in the sand. But if we are not quick to discern it, it may get swept away by the waves! We can also read the purpose of our life through many other sources. If everything fails, look into one's heart and there in all probability, we will find it! Lovely write!
So true, Valsa, It is in our heart. Spending some time in nature may facilitate the process but if we do not find it, we have to keep searching. :)
The sand of the land with the muse of love and joy! Nice work.
This is really wonderful write.The purpose of our life written on grains of sands, on the wves of seas, painted in the skies, fall as rain as diamond beads on petals of rose, carried in the scent of roses or can be found deep within written in our heart- - - - - - - - Oh love every bit of this poem.Thank you so much for sharing this marvelous write.