Yes. Poem by Tom Allport

Yes.

Rating: 5.0


A painted on expression
Of a hapless root cause
An etched on memory
Forever bleeding sores
The disgruntled look
Yes you're the cause.

Monday, March 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: responsibility
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 13 March 2019

I'd go with " etched-on" . to MyPoemList. i like it. how many such disgruntled looks have been caused by me? but, i have excuses! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! bri :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 March 2019

When the cause gives bleeding this provokes thought. The expression etches on memory. A sensitive poem is wonderfully penned. This is wonderful...10

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