Sunday, November 21, 2021

Yesterdays Dreamer Comments

Rating: 4.3

If you want to be loved
Then learn to feel hurt
And if you ever swallowed trust
You'll pay for just desserts
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Kevin Patrick
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Lyn Paul 12 March 2023

An unpleasant feeling, I would imagine.

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Jayne Davies 20 December 2021

Well written 🙂 Well done

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 23 November 2021

Superbly penned; I enjoyed the theme of last line.

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Leann Pilgrim 22 November 2021

Yes, I know what that feels like because I feel it every single painful day

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 November 2021

It takes a loner to really know the difference seen from friend and foe....I totally agree with you.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 21 November 2021

Kevin, you're a man after my heart. I do feel the same way and you put it beautifully in this poem

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