You And I Poem by Alancia Lebogang Mogorosi

You And I

Rating: 5.0

Like a river flow
With passion of melody so down and low
With an embrace so warm and tender
We will grow fonder

You are my love and I am your reflection
Every season there is more attraction
You and I, we are the founder of love
That flap like the wings of the dove

You and I can climb the highest mountain peak
Cause love is there for us to pick
Even the stars aren't far
Cause with you silk become fur

You and I, we are the light of heaven
When I am with you I am forgiven
There is no hide even in a cave
Because you and I, we are for love

'Nothing is stronger than love'

Marcia Morris 11 September 2007

nice write, however I think you should work on the 8th line. It's the longest line.Keep writing!

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Bob Blackwell 23 August 2008

You are right nothing is stronger than love. Lovely poem

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Yonela Mali 04 October 2007

wow that is just beautiful

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jazmine kristen 22 September 2007 much emotion I love it! ! !

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Dr.subhendu Kar 22 September 2007

That flap like the wings of the dove....................excellent imagery of love i love it, thanks for sharing

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Alexander Steen Stewart 14 September 2007

hey first off thanks for the comment and i found your poem amazing: D

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Alancia Lebogang Mogorosi

Alancia Lebogang Mogorosi

South Africa< Mpumalanga
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