Thursday, May 16, 2013

You Are For Me And For Ever Comments

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She hid within me, down deep and slept
When closed my eyes, I unwept, wept
O the tide of time, she danced brightly on you
Let the evening come, hand to hand unto
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Aftab Alam
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Alexander Coppedge 22 June 2013

Great poem of love Had a slight problem with this line Smiling moon, for eternity, greet and treat from her tripped me a little Everything else very well expressed

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Ruby Mostazir 19 May 2013

great write...... May Allah bless her.

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Sallam Yassin 18 May 2013

true love no time can split or take as in a true heart she still alive/ well done let Allah bless you all (this family of love)

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 18 May 2013

The poem, a great one, sends a shiver of pangs through my heart. Thanks Aftab.

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